Self Evaluation

First, what score do you think you deserve? Write a brief justification.
-  I think I deserve 2 points because I included all of the 5 classical argument elements. Also, I have strong research to make my essay strong. 

Next, let's decide what did you do well, and what could you do better?

1) Narration, I tried to put information about history of animal testing. It helps people understand my essay.

2) At fist, I wrote my essay separately. If I don't make paragraphs connected to each other, It is difficult for people to read my eassay. So I tried to connect my essay to each other.

 

Please recall the 5 parts of the classical argument. Which part of the classical argument did you use the best? Which part could be improved?
1) Narration. I put information about history of animal testing, which helps people understand animal testing better.

 2) Confirmation. I think I have to paraphrase information in order to make people understand better.

 

 

Last, what's your strategy for your next draft? Where will you focus your attention to make the second draft stronger?

- I will paraphrase information in order to help people read my essay. And I will not plagiarize.